Essay #1 Sample Outline

Essay #1 Sample Outline

 

Thesis statement:  The Oldsmobile ad entices businessmen to purchase the Aurora by appealing to their needs for prominence and attention.

 

Topic Sentence #1:  In order to appeal to businessmen’s need for prominence and attention, advertisers portray the Aurora as a car of class and distinction.

 

Topic Sentence #2:  The antique shop depicted in the ad also targets male professionals’ desire for prestige.

Topic Sentence #3:  In addition, the billboard above the antique shop draws in the male audience by suggesting that the car will make them stand out to women.

Topic Sentence #4:  Advertisers include carefully selected  text in the ad that plays on businessmen’s desire for prominence and attention.